The weakest way to start your cover letter is with ¡°To Whom It May Concern.¡± This vague, antiquated phrase causes a hiring manager to ask, ¡°Does this really concern me?¡± ¨C at which point your letter will pale compared to all the more urgent matters on their desk.
Fortunately, it¡¯s easy to avoid ¡°To Whom It May Concern¡± as your salutation. See how to address your recipient more clearly and confidently.
Use This Default Greeting
First, replace ¡°To Whom It May Concern¡± with the more straightforward ¡°Dear Hiring Manager.¡± Consider this phrase your new default for those rare cases where you don¡¯t know anything about your addressee or the hiring organization. But also view it as a foundation on which it¡¯s important to put other details revealed by the job posting.
Here are the five most common types of information you can find in a job posting, along with tips for adding them to ¡°Dear Hiring Manager.¡±
1. Company name
Most job postings specify the hiring company. In these cases, simply place it before ¡°Hiring Manager.¡±
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Dear [Company] Hiring Manager:
Example
Dear SZN Inc. Hiring Manager:
2. Division or department name
If the job posting doesn¡¯t name the company, it may still mention the division or department you¡¯d be working for. Take the same approach.
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Dear [Department] Hiring Manager:
Example
Dear Sales Department Hiring Manager:
3. Addressee¡¯s job title
Some job postings give the title of the person you¡¯re sending your application to or would report to in the role. Replace ¡°Hiring Manager¡± with their given title.
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Dear [Job Title]:
Examples
Dear Recruiting Manager:
Dear Internship Coordinator:
You can combine these first three variables to the extent you know them, such as with:
Dear [Company] [Job Title]:
Example
Dear TAO Services Accounting Manager:
But depending on the job details, that can make an awkward ¡°noun pileup¡± such as:
Dear PricewaterhouseCoopers Sales & Marketing Department Recruitment Officer:
In these cases, keep the job title but move the other details above your greeting, as in:
PricewaterhouseCoopers
Sales & Marketing Department
300 Madison Ave
New York, NY 10017
Dear Recruitment Officer:
Or, if you¡¯re sending your cover letter as an email message, you can move details up to the subject line instead:
[Subject] Job inquiry ¨C PricewaterhouseCoopers Sales & Marketing
Dear Recruitment Officer:
4. Work culture
If you know or can tell a hiring company¡¯s work culture is on the casual side, you can trade out ¡°Dear¡± for the less formal ¡°Hello,¡± ¡°Greetings,¡± or even ¡°Good morning.¡± You can also make the text slightly less formal by trading the colon at the end of the line for a comma.
Example
Greetings SOE Services,
5. Addressee¡¯s name
As the best option, trade out ¡°Hiring Manager¡± for the addressee¡¯s name if it appears on the job posting.
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Dear [Mr./Ms./Mx.] [Last Name]:
Example
Dear Mr. Bergsen:
Use ¡°Ms.¡± for female recipient names unless the job posting suggests they¡¯re to be addressed as ¡°Mrs.¡± or ¡°Miss.¡±
If the recipient¡¯s name is non-gender specific, use their full name (or just their first name for a company with a more casual work culture).
Examples
Dear Alex,
Dear Alex Thompson:
Keep Your Introduction Personal
Apart from ¡°Dear Hiring Manager¡± and its many variations, you can also avoid ¡°To Whom It May Concern¡± by referring to the job opening at hand, as in:
Re: [Job Title] Opening
Example
Re: Sales Manager Job Opening
This option is specific and concise enough. But we don¡¯t recommend it because it¡¯s not very personable. When possible, address your recipient directly ¨C your cover letter is, after all, a letter. By keeping that human touch, you¡¯ll help hiring managers envision you as someone they can call and have in for an interview.
Frequently Asked Questions: ¡°To Whom It May Concern¡± on a Cover Letter
Is it professional to say, ¡°To Whom It May Concern¡±? -
Technically, yes. “To Whom It May Concern” is a formal phrase long used for certain business communications. But it’s a poor choice for a cover letter and may even be seen as unprofessional by recipients whose names you know or can easily find.
Why is ¡°To Whom It May Concern¡± a bad cover letter greeting? -
Because it comes off as vague and passive. Two main goals of any cover letter are to engage with a specific employer or job opening and to strike a confident tone. You can serve these goals better by addressing your recipient directly or using ¡°Dear Hiring Manager¡± if no details about them are available.
Can I omit my cover letter greeting altogether? -
Yes, but we discourage it. When your letter cuts straight to the first sentence, it can make hiring managers doubt you¡¯re addressing them specifically. It can also make them unsure if they¡¯ve even received your full message.
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